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The flame inside has never burned for me.

You told me you loved, but that I cannot see.

I always see you looking at her.

You always say, it's nothing I swear.

Then I catch you one day, with her just as I thought.

Kissing, of course, further increasing my distraught.

It's not what I think? Ha! I doubt that completely.

You just smile and look at me sweetly,

saying It was not going to last for much longer anyways.

You planned on breaking up in a matter of days.

I run off, I give up, what else can I do?

My thoughts will not leave the scene of you two.

Then my mind strays to the knife in my room.

Just two people is all, lead them them to their doom

My knife says to me, so in my pocket it hides

And waits for the light, to expose their insides.

I see my targets, kissing under the tree.

My heart is full of an unknown glee.

With suprise, I lunge! And get my love's neck.

Then the screaming girl, I damn them to heck.

Finally the last one, who started it all.

My life is now taken. Dark, without love, I shall fall.
©2009 ~AyaOni-chan
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Author's Comments

This is really dark. I have a bad love life. As in I give up on love. Did a long time ago.

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:iconkokoshki:
Thats why I prefer Fictional boys.
Though I do have a bf. But I still prefer fiction.
Even though with the fictional ones I choose I end up maing others jelous. For some reason....

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:iconayaoni-chan:
I've never even been in a flippin relationship and I give up on love. it hurts too mant people.

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:iconkokoshki:
Why give up on a first thing though?. Is this poem based on assumptions? or actual proof?

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32 PEOPLE LOVE MY FK+ANGEL PAIRING! BOOYAH! IN YOUR FACE!!!! Hehehe...
:iconayaoni-chan:
It hurts everyone. It is proof. Other people's proof. Never have I seen a relationship that works. Not even my parents.

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:iconkokoshki:
I already know this...
No sense in telling me, I've lived for a long time. I am 18.
Of course..Thats reality it's life. But I don't see the point, We are all going to die in a couple of years.
With people who complain now, There is always going to be something that will be worse. No sense in arguing over it. That whould be my advice to people. There are stuff that is way worse out there, yet they complain over the smallest of things. Then I tell them "Have a gun pointed at you when your only four years old by your own father, Then tell me how fucked up your life is" But I digress on my past.
But it's all in good taste.

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:iconayaoni-chan:
Yes. Sorry if I don't say much right now. I have a lot on my mind to take care of.

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:iconyuriko-chan24:
you and lily should really meet eachother...
0x0 um...^^; forget i said that...

ok, not trying to put salt on the wound here, but Alex and i have had it rough with eachother quite a few times...and he's always worked it out with me. i know how you feel nat...i've been there. i thought no guy on earth would ever love me and then i met him. don't give up on something you still have a chance at. :cuddle:

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I was born with an enormous need for affection, and a terrible need to give it.
~Audrey Hepburn

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Je t'aime beaucoup, beaucoup. Pour toujours. "i will always love you. forever."
:iconayaoni-chan:
:hug: Thanks... but no thanks.

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:iconyuriko-chan24:
you say you give up but i bet you'll find a guy that really likes you...:eyes:

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~Audrey Hepburn

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Je t'aime beaucoup, beaucoup. Pour toujours. "i will always love you. forever."

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